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Vulcan

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Don't keep questioning!

RESIST, RESIST, RESIST, RESIST, RESIST!
Stay out of control!
We're outta control, we're outta control, we're outta control, WE"RE OUTTA CONTROL!!
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I didn't used to send a lot of critics but here i wanna give you my oinion on this one.

First, the whole picture have a nice impact, we have a character at the center of interessest you did well.
We have a nice facial expression for the pain feeling with in this view eyes a little curved down and mouth open. Maybe add a little tears on her right cheek and make the eyesmore wet could enhanced this feeling.
For the whole picture you should try to add more colours in this one, we can see you use some greenish value in the left top part of the picture as well.
To come back to the character, her mouth is really open so we should see her tonsils coming to the front in her mouth. While you open the mouth for pain feeling often, the tongue is a little curved to the top of the mouth.
As some people told it in comments under, maybe some more work on the ears would be nice.
In all case i really like the whole pictures and here are just some details wich i think could improve the final image rendering.

I'm not good at character drawing so here is just my personal opinion and so does my tastes

Once again, a really good work so keep it up.